The silence that embraces you
A downloadable game for Windows and Linux
Languages: English and Spanish
Note: English is not a language I handle perfectly, so you may find errors in my translations. I apologize in advance.
Note2 :If the game starts in Spanish, just go to the options button (the third button) and change the language.
"The Silence that Embraces You" is a romantic visual novel with elements of fantasy, mystery, and touches of horror. The protagonist, Greebent, has the ability to see things that others cannot, a gift he has possessed since childhood.
It all begins with a tragic family event that sets off a series of increasingly strange events, leading Greebent to uncover the hidden secrets within his own family. Along the way, he will confront an incident that surpasses any strange occurrence he has ever experienced.
This visual novel contains animations, so it is recommended to proceed through the dialogues carefully to avoid skipping them.
While the novel may touch upon sensitive topics, it never seeks to romanticize unfavorable situations. It is purely a work of fiction.
Please note that this visual novel will contain mature content (+18).
I am working on this project entirely on my own. The backgrounds and character designs will receive their due attention in due time. For now, my main goal is to complete this visual novel.
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Idiomas: Ingles y español
Nota: SI el juego incia en ingles solo es ir al boton de OPTIONS y cambiar el idioma.
El silencio que te abraza es una visual novel romantica con fantasia, misterio y un poco de horror. El protgonista, Greebent, cuenta con la capacidad de ver cosas que otros no, esto desde que era pequeño.
Todo comienza con un lamentable suceso familiar el cual da incio una serie de eventos por demas extraños que motivaran a Greebent a descubrir los secretos que se esconden dentro de su familia, esto mientras se enfrente a un suceso que va mas alla de caulquier cosa extraña que el alla vivido.
Esta novela visual contiene animaciones, por lo que se recomienda seguir los diálogos con cuidado para evitar omitirlas.
La novela puede manejar temas sensibles pero nunca se busca romantizar situaciones desfavorables, esto es solo una obra de ficción.
En el desarrollo de esta visual se llegara a incluir contenido +18.
El trabajo lo estoy realizando totalmente en solitario. Los fondos y diseños de personajes en su momento recibirán su debida atención. Por el momento la meta sera concluir esta VN.
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Development log
- The silencie that embrace youJul 09, 2023
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Now that I think about it when I saw the main character from the beginning to the end it's not a very easy life I hope we can see his life improve :/
honestly it's too incredible nothing to say I can't wait to see what happens next, take your time to do your work hehehe^^
A preeetty good start~ ^^_ esspecially for some1ne doing all of this on their own :p I can certainly tell that xou have a penchant for storytelling UwU xou've got a lot of great ideas, so I would really like to see them brought to life in the way that they deserve :)
The 1irst thing I advise xou to imporove upon is the inner dialogue box. It's a bit difficult to understand when Greebent is speaking to himself and when he's speaking outloud :/ perhaps xou could change the shape of the name box? Or maybe even remove the name box all together? :3
2econdly, I'd ask that xou postedit everything that xou've written so far. While I was able to get the overall vibe xou're going for, some scenes could benefit from being fleshed out a bit more. I do understand that English not being xour primary language could contribute to things getting lost in translation, but a bit of fine tuning never hurts :) I think xou'll find that going over everything xou've written will not just help with describing xour story better, but it will certainly help xou grow as a writer UwU
I really do think that xou have something good going here :D the story is fun, the lore is extremely creative, and I'm really interested to know the characters on a more personal level~ ;) I think xou've done a fine ass job so far, so keep at it! n__n/
owo thank you very much for the observations.
I was scared by the fact that he didn't understand himself when he thought and when he spoke. I think I'll make his internal dialogue box more different so that it stands out.
Yes, the dialogues were complicated for me xD I had to change many things that from Spanish to English would not make sense, but I will consult with a friend who does speak it quite fluently.
I will give another good review to all the dialogues and try to make them clearer. In the second update I hope to have it resolved or at least a little clearer.
Again thank you very much xD you solved two of my biggest doubts, now I know where I should work more.
Happy to help~ <3 always nice to have a new and interesting VN :)